Option One: Write one paragraph about a place or an event that has influenced who you are. Why is/was this place or event so important? How did it shape your morals or beliefs? Be sure you include a topic sentence, specific examples that support your topic sentence, and a final concluding sentence that wraps up your ideas.
The one event that has had a big influence on me is the time I went to the movies with my ex-boyfriend for my birthday after he had got back from out of town. It was a week after my 16th birthday and my ex called me up and said hey lets go to the movies and I thought it would be fun and enjoyable. I thought since I had always thought he was different than a lot of dudes and he was a gentlemen so going to see a movie would be fine. While at the movies we had met up with a couple more people and it was fine but as soon as we got into the movie he started acting really ghetto and unacceptable. Since it wasn't the movie him and his cousin wanted to see they were texting each other back and forth yelling during the movie and being really rude. After that day I have not talked to him since i realized that day that I do not like ghetto people and i would rather not be apart of such acts. I have never told him about his actions but ever since that day i began to realize that acting out in public is not me and that it is just another way to be steroetyped at this age. Going to the movies with him changed my thoughts about him as a person and im glad I went.
Option Three: Write one paragraph about a time when you felt uncomfortable or out of place. Where were you? Who were you with? Why did you feel so out of place? What did you learn about yourself as a result? Be sure you include a topic sentence, specific examples that support your topic sentence, and a final concluding sentence that wraps up your ideas.
I'll never forget when I came to register for Edina High School. It was difficult to adjust to but now I love being here. In mid August my mom and I came to Edina High School to see my counselor to get my schedule worked out and to get my pictures taking. We walked into the school and I automatically felt uncomfortable yes eveyone was nice but I felt out of place I saw no one of the same ethnicity as me and I then started questioning my mom about her choice of sending me here. I thought my counselor was nice and all but I didn't connect with nobody else he assured me I was not alone and I would be fine. My mom told me to stop worrying and I did race didn't matter but I don't like being out numbered. The first day of school changed my thoughts I thought I wouldn't fit in but by the second day I had tons of friends evey race. I wad proud of myself and I told my mom that I was happy with the choice of Edina. I learned that I am just shy at first and I need to feel welcomed in order to open up to changes. I also learned in order to be okay with change I have to be positive and look at it in a good way instead of a bad way .
Wednesday, November 7, 2007
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Assignment # 2
I agree with that statement because when your in high school the friends you choice most of the time have the biggest influence on what you do in life and the kind of choices you make. At the same time i disagree because you can hang out with people that do bad stuff but still have friends that do and encourage you to do your work and stay on task in school. I have friends that may smoke but when we hang out its still fun because that's not always the case and it's never effected me because i don't smoke. It depends on who you are if you let everyone tell you that your not cool because your being yourself than they're not your true friends. My friends have never made me feel like that because they know it's not me and they respect me by not doing it around me and that's important to me. Not being part of the moment or the in crowd sometimes is the right thing because you don't want to get caught up in the wrong stuff.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Assignment #1
1. Why do you think Rameck made the choices he did? He knew right from wrong, so what motivated him to choose the "wrong" path as a teen? I think that Rameck made the choices he made simply because he wanted to fit in and be cool to his boys. His friends are why Rameck keeps getting on the wrong path.
2. Considering both his parents were drug addicts, was he really responsible for his actions? Explain your opinion. I don't think he was because growing up Rameck didn't have either of his parents to teach him right from wrong he saw stuff that hurt him so as he got older his parents were not the ones helping him be a better person it was teachers and others in his life. After getting in trouble a couple times Rameck decided it was time to do better and then start hanging out with different people that were about something.
3. Are young people responsible for their actions if they have no good role models or people to teach them the right way to live? Explain your opinion. Yes i think they are although not every teen in this world has both parents or role models in their lives it is your responsibility as a young adult to make something of yourself and show everyone you can be someone without having others involved and if you don't have parents turn to someone at school or maybe even a superstar.
4. Who are the biggest influences in your own life? In what ways have they shaped you? What have they taught you? My sisters are my biggest influences in my life because when they were my age they did a lot more than me they got into trouble and from living with them my whole life i promised my mom when i was little i wasn't going to be like that and i kept that i do not get into trouble i listen tomy mom and i make sure to be in when she tells me. I have done dumb stuff before but my sisters are the first ones to yell at me because they have always told me do good and listen to mom and as i got older i really take all the talks i've had with them and whenever im making decisions i think about my mom and what the consequences would be.
2. Considering both his parents were drug addicts, was he really responsible for his actions? Explain your opinion. I don't think he was because growing up Rameck didn't have either of his parents to teach him right from wrong he saw stuff that hurt him so as he got older his parents were not the ones helping him be a better person it was teachers and others in his life. After getting in trouble a couple times Rameck decided it was time to do better and then start hanging out with different people that were about something.
3. Are young people responsible for their actions if they have no good role models or people to teach them the right way to live? Explain your opinion. Yes i think they are although not every teen in this world has both parents or role models in their lives it is your responsibility as a young adult to make something of yourself and show everyone you can be someone without having others involved and if you don't have parents turn to someone at school or maybe even a superstar.
4. Who are the biggest influences in your own life? In what ways have they shaped you? What have they taught you? My sisters are my biggest influences in my life because when they were my age they did a lot more than me they got into trouble and from living with them my whole life i promised my mom when i was little i wasn't going to be like that and i kept that i do not get into trouble i listen tomy mom and i make sure to be in when she tells me. I have done dumb stuff before but my sisters are the first ones to yell at me because they have always told me do good and listen to mom and as i got older i really take all the talks i've had with them and whenever im making decisions i think about my mom and what the consequences would be.
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